Well, I'm writing a fiction book, but it doesn't really have a plot or anything, I just keep writing it and thinking about what to write as I go, so what do you think?

I had never been more afraid in my life than I was now. There, standing in front of me was my worst nightmare. He was blacker than night and he had a white crescent moon in the middle of his forehead that shined brighter than the sun itself.
I stood frozen to my spot, I was afraid to move, I didn't want to scare him. Suddenly, there was a noise in the forest that spooked him. He reared up against the moon. He was taller than three of me put together. His scream was like a thorn piercing the flesh. I took his distraction as an opportunity to run.
I heard him crash down behind me, but I didn't look back, I just kept running.....

So, that's just the beginning, I have lots more right now. Let me know what you think Thanks--